Sabtu, 11 April 2009

A wrong first reaction

Cerberus,an aggressive dog find himself to have been put in a huge room where all the wall are made from mirror. Realizing that a similiarly aggressive dog is staring at him, cerberus grind his teeth and bark severely toward to attack it only to know that 4 angry dogs he will not be able to conquer are surrounding him. Feeling terrorized, cerberus runs away from them but it was a futile attemp, whereever he moves his reflection keep on following him. cerberus runs around the hall trying to get rid of the nightmarish sight only to exhaust all his breath and energy. The frightened dog fainted and dies following futile attemps to run away from himself.

If only he had started by displaying friendly attitude, the "four other dogs" would have done the same thing and the whole story would have been very diffrent. Often in life, we do not get what we want because we give wrong first reactionto what would otherwise havve led us to a happy ending.

3 komentar:

  1. "he will not be able to conquer are surrounding him." - line 5, sounds weird





    A lot errors on punctuation..

    BalasHapus
  2. T.T i'll never be a good writer *sigh*

    BalasHapus
  3. it always happens when i wrote too fast
    correction:
    only to tell the other dogs that they are unable to conquer him or surround him.

    BalasHapus